Fernando is right you have done so much work! Just a few things to take a look at: The head is too small in comparison to the body. One way to remedy the situation is to paint into the body and diminish the bulk of the figure. That would bring the proportions more in line with one another. I know some of this is due to the original awkward position of the figure in the reference painting that you are working from. Also check the positioning of the ear because I think it is too far forward in the face. Also not sure what is happening with the shadow on the top of the bottom hand.... I know I have mentioned a lot of things but over all I think it is a really good effort and you just have to keep working at it. Good Job!
wow!! She looks great.... you've made such great leap from the last time i saw it..i like the colors in the hair.. Probably the broad shoulders make her head look small.
WOW! Eda that's amazing! You did so much work and it looks great!
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Fernando is right you have done so much work! Just a few things to take a look at: The head is too small in comparison to the body. One way to remedy the situation is to paint into the body and diminish the bulk of the figure. That would bring the proportions more in line with one another. I know some of this is due to the original awkward position of the figure in the reference painting that you are working from. Also check the positioning of the ear because I think it is too far forward in the face. Also not sure what is happening with the shadow on the top of the bottom hand.... I know I have mentioned a lot of things but over all I think it is a really good effort and you just have to keep working at it. Good Job!
ReplyDeletewow!! She looks great.... you've made such great leap from the last time i saw it..i like the colors in the hair.. Probably the broad shoulders make her head look small.
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